Score: 10

"Excellent Stuff Keep Em' Comin'!"

submission: The Hobnobbers: Episode 3

date: September 23, 2003

This series is really funny and entertaining, I don't say this often, but this is way too good to be a flash cartoon, you should send some of this stuff to Fox or Comedy Central and see what they think. Also, you should stick with the episode to episode connection, or maybe switch to a new story after every four or five episodes so new comers to the series don't have to watch a million episodes to get up to date, this is like an excellent twisted soap opera and I'm loving every minute of it. Also, I think you should do something more dialogue-wise to develop Hector's character, the "dead brother" jokes are way more hilarious than seeing him get hurt and killed in every episode, that's already been done to death in South Park, I'd much rather like to see more of him expressing himself verbally in a goofy way that pokes fun at his death, than physical comedy, but this is your cartoon so don't mind me too much, just my thoughts. One last note, I hope their dad isn't something supernatural, it's cool how everyone has their own sick unhealthy obsession so I can't wait to see what the Dad's is, he must be pretty sick to not be welcome to live with the family, unless I'm mistaken and he does. I just figured since the girl knew she would be alone for weeks the father must not be a part of their lives on a regular basis, sorry about this long review but I'm just really stoked about this cartoon, you're really onto something big and don't let anyone tell you different, great job Pzuto.

Score: 1

"That Was Really Stupid"

submission: Ghetto Kids episode1

date: April 3, 2003

That was the most dull and unintersting flash I have ever seen. The dialogue just sounded like two dumb highschoolers joking around except it was nowhere near as funny as Beavis and Butthead. You need much better material, to make funny flash you need to actually have good joking skills in real life. I suggest you should go practice by fucking with people on yahoo, you'll learn alot. Until you do this, BLAM, BLAM, BLAM, ,BLAM!!!!

Score: 2

"Pretty Stupid"

submission: Stick Gangs

date: April 3, 2003

With most ghetto parodies it's funny because most of it is just social satire. This on the other hand, was just corny and retarded. It looks like you just watched a bunch of gang movies on cinemax and thought you could do the voices well enough to do a flash. Try to be more creative and make funny flash about stuff you actually know about instead of stuff like this.

Score: 0

"THAT SHIT WAS SOOOOOOOOO TITE NIGGA!!!!!"

submission: U Know U Ghetto

date: April 2, 2003

April Fools Mutha Fucka

Score: 9

"Really Good"

submission: What u need is some crack

date: March 21, 2003

It was funny as hell but you can put in a little more effort.

Score: 10

"You Bad Ass Little White Kid"

submission: Walk Through Stick Ghetto

date: March 21, 2003

You are a silly little jerk making fun of a culture you know nothing about, but still this flash is one of the most creative and funny things I have seen in a very long time. Keep up the great work kid and in another 10 years you'll be on NBC stereotyping blacks and mexicans in no time. :)